Pains at the Panopticon

With the help of my pal Gary, who formats my books for publication, and my pal The Waitress, who has copyedited my most recent hunk o’ words to prevent my most egregious stupidisms from seeing light of web, I have posted Chapter Three of The Pains.

On the evidence, this project is coming out of the induced coma it’s been in for nearly a year now. With any luck the next chapter will be up soon.

Note: attentive readers may notice some allusions to, and borrowing from, the work of the late Chis McKinstry, creator of the Mindpixel project. As far as I’ve been able to determine, there is no copyright holder. I’ll have more to say about this when the final book is prepared for publication, but for now I just want to make this acknowledgement.


  1. The html title tag in chapter 3 claims it’s still chapter 2. Also, you still haven’t fixed the Tibble/Tribble thing in chapter 1.

    I eagerly await chapter 4. đŸ™‚

  2. Eann,

    Noted. One of these days, maybe even today, I’ll fix these nits. Chapter 4 coming soon, where “soon” is defined in my own charmingly idiosyncratic way.

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